Wiki:Wikiwriters (Choose Your Own Adventure)
Description: Students add paragraphs to the Choose Your Own Adventure story that was started. It turns into some pretty cool writing and reading.Students really are enjoying doing it.
Topic: Writing extension, Reading
Continue other stories by writing a paragraph about what happened next and ending your paragraph with a Cliffhanger so that others can continue your story.
You should add at least one new paragraph to a story every class period and edit another one.
Add your "Door" link to the bottom of the paragraph after it has been edited and initialed.
For example:
On his/her/my walk home from school, to her/his/my new house, he/I/she saw the mail truck stopped at their/my house. Deciding to be nice to his/her/my parents he/she/I got the mail out of the mailbox and brought it into the house. While throwing the mail onto the kitchen counter, a bright red envelope caught his/her/my eye. Curious, he/she/I looked at the bright rosy envelope to see who it was for. It said "Please deliver to the shed behind the house." Thinking this was a fun game, thought up by his/her/my parents to get him/her/me to find the new bike that had been promised, he/she/I walked out to the shed, opened the door and stepped it side. Boom! The door slammed shut behind him/her/me, it was locked. Feeling around for the light switch he/she/I found them and flicked the switch. The lights came on and he/she/I saw a room with over 30 closed doors. Not knowing what else to do he/she/I walked over and opened door number...
Door Links:
1. because it was closest and immediately got blasted with a snow storm.
justin1
He opened door number 1 because it was the closest, and immediately got blasted with a snow storm. He looked behind him, and once again the door closed behind him with a slam! He turned back around, and looked straight into the snowstorm looking for some kind of civilization, but didn't find anything. He started walking hoping to find something. He was really cold since he was in the snow with a shirt and shorts. He was really thirsty so he reached down, grabbed a patch of snow, and put it in his mouth. It was cold and icy exactly like he thought it would be. He kept walking and saw something or someone in front of him moving towards him. By now he could tell it was a person, and he was walking towards him very fast. He stood where he was with his hands in front of his face, balled in a fist. He heard heavy footsteps behind him. He turned and then everything went black...
Claudine2
He woke to find himself in some bag. It was pitch black and he couldn't see anything. His ear was pressed against the floor, and could hear a soft rumbling and feel vibrations under him. I guess I'm in a car, he thought. The car went over a bump and he lifted off the floor. He landed hard on the floor and moaned. The car stopped and he heard a door open. Someone grabbed the bag he was in and threw me on the ground. The bag opened and light streamed in. Someone pulled him out, and he looked around. The place looked really familiar...
Robyn4
He realized that it was the first house he had lived in, the one he had spent his childhood in. He had lived there until he was 8 years old, and his parents had suddenly packed up and forced him to move away with them. He hadn't been here since. His arms and legs were tied behind his back with some kind of twine, and he struggled to free himself from the tight knots. Suddenly, two when strode up to him, grim smiles on their faces.
"Good evening. I'm sure you're quite confused as to why you are here... We need your memories. There is a hidden treasure in this very house, and you know where it is. So, we can do this the easy way, or the hard way." The man said. He honestly had no idea what the man was talking about. He didn't remember anything abnormal about this house, it was just... a house! Suddenly the man started to yell.
"Well? What will it be!?"
"I... I don't know what you're talking about...." And with that, the mysterious man blindfolded him...
2.two. She started to open it slowly...
baileyb1
Two. She started to open it slowly, then it swung open revealing a black room. A gust of wind blew into her face and she was sucked into the black abyss. She stood there, shaking in fear. She didn't know what to do. When suddenly small lights started blink at the end of the room. Overhead lights flickered on revealing a hallway, long and dull. Also very cold. It had gray stone walls and a cracked cement floor. Wood crates were lined against the wall. You could hear water leaking through the ceiling. She stepped in a small black puddle, Then froze. She was stuck to the ground. The black goo climbed her leg. She started to panic. She was thrashing her leg around, trying to get it lose from the sticky slime that was trying to consume her. "Help! Help!" She cried. Suddenly a short little man came running thought the double door at the end for the hall way...
baileyb2
The little man was holding a small ray-gun thing. Then shot the ray-gun at the goo climbing up to my knee now. The goo evaporated into the air. "What in the world was that?!" The little mad looked up at me with a shocked look on his face. "Who are you? What are you doing here?" I opened my mouth to speak, but the man cut me off. "No, there is no time to waste." He grabbed me by the arm and pulled me though the double doors. Suddenly I was in a class room. I looked like a college biology room. No students. Just the teacher. He looked troubled. "Professor! I found something to do the autopsy on!" I froze then jerked my hand away from him. "No!" I said. "I am not going to let you do that on me." They looked confused. "I am a living thing! And I want to keep living." Out of instinct I bolted out the doors and began running. There was no other door out of this place. I skidded, and then slid though the wall in front of me. When I opened my eyes again I was in the same biology room, but this time it was full of students. "Where have you been?" He paused. "No time for excuses. Go sit down!"...
baileyb3
She didn't bother protesting, she just walked to the nearest open seat and sat down. "Okay class, today well be disecting frogs." Her heart skipped a beat. Her palms were sweaty. "Um, sir?" The Proffesor turned. "I don't feel like killing a innocent amphibian. I mean, what did he ever do to you?" He gave her a puzzled look. "What to you mean? You have killed plenty of things before." Her eyes got wider. "What is up with you Cammie?" A girl asked sitting next to her. "What?! My name is Ashley! Not Cammie." "What are you talking about?" Another boy said. "I am talking about you have the wrong girl! I am Ashley." The girl next to her pulled out a mirror. Ash looked into the mirror and screamed. Her long blonde hair had disapered and had left behind shoulder length light brown hair. Her blue eyes changed to dark green and her thin lips tranced formed into plump pink lips. Also her rounded face was now heart-shaped, but the weirdest part was, she now had a nose and lip ring...
Description: Students add paragraphs to the Choose Your Own Adventure story that was started. It turns into some pretty cool writing and reading.Students really are enjoying doing it.
Topic: Writing extension, Reading
Continue other stories by writing a paragraph about what happened next and ending your paragraph with a Cliffhanger so that others can continue your story.
You should add at least one new paragraph to a story every class period and edit another one.
Add your "Door" link to the bottom of the paragraph after it has been edited and initialed.
For example:
On his/her/my walk home from school, to her/his/my new house, he/I/she saw the mail truck stopped at their/my house. Deciding to be nice to his/her/my parents he/she/I got the mail out of the mailbox and brought it into the house. While throwing the mail onto the kitchen counter, a bright red envelope caught his/her/my eye. Curious, he/she/I looked at the bright rosy envelope to see who it was for. It said "Please deliver to the shed behind the house." Thinking this was a fun game, thought up by his/her/my parents to get him/her/me to find the new bike that had been promised, he/she/I walked out to the shed, opened the door and stepped it side. Boom! The door slammed shut behind him/her/me, it was locked. Feeling around for the light switch he/she/I found them and flicked the switch. The lights came on and he/she/I saw a room with over 30 closed doors. Not knowing what else to do he/she/I walked over and opened door number...
Door Links:
1. because it was closest and immediately got blasted with a snow storm.
justin1
He opened door number 1 because it was the closest, and immediately got blasted with a snow storm. He looked behind him, and once again the door closed behind him with a slam! He turned back around, and looked straight into the snowstorm looking for some kind of civilization, but didn't find anything. He started walking hoping to find something. He was really cold since he was in the snow with a shirt and shorts. He was really thirsty so he reached down, grabbed a patch of snow, and put it in his mouth. It was cold and icy exactly like he thought it would be. He kept walking and saw something or someone in front of him moving towards him. By now he could tell it was a person, and he was walking towards him very fast. He stood where he was with his hands in front of his face, balled in a fist. He heard heavy footsteps behind him. He turned and then everything went black...
Claudine2
He woke to find himself in some bag. It was pitch black and he couldn't see anything. His ear was pressed against the floor, and could hear a soft rumbling and feel vibrations under him. I guess I'm in a car, he thought. The car went over a bump and he lifted off the floor. He landed hard on the floor and moaned. The car stopped and he heard a door open. Someone grabbed the bag he was in and threw me on the ground. The bag opened and light streamed in. Someone pulled him out, and he looked around. The place looked really familiar...
Robyn4
He realized that it was the first house he had lived in, the one he had spent his childhood in. He had lived there until he was 8 years old, and his parents had suddenly packed up and forced him to move away with them. He hadn't been here since. His arms and legs were tied behind his back with some kind of twine, and he struggled to free himself from the tight knots. Suddenly, two when strode up to him, grim smiles on their faces.
"Good evening. I'm sure you're quite confused as to why you are here... We need your memories. There is a hidden treasure in this very house, and you know where it is. So, we can do this the easy way, or the hard way." The man said. He honestly had no idea what the man was talking about. He didn't remember anything abnormal about this house, it was just... a house! Suddenly the man started to yell.
"Well? What will it be!?"
"I... I don't know what you're talking about...." And with that, the mysterious man blindfolded him...
2.two. She started to open it slowly...
baileyb1
Two. She started to open it slowly, then it swung open revealing a black room. A gust of wind blew into her face and she was sucked into the black abyss. She stood there, shaking in fear. She didn't know what to do. When suddenly small lights started blink at the end of the room. Overhead lights flickered on revealing a hallway, long and dull. Also very cold. It had gray stone walls and a cracked cement floor. Wood crates were lined against the wall. You could hear water leaking through the ceiling. She stepped in a small black puddle, Then froze. She was stuck to the ground. The black goo climbed her leg. She started to panic. She was thrashing her leg around, trying to get it lose from the sticky slime that was trying to consume her. "Help! Help!" She cried. Suddenly a short little man came running thought the double door at the end for the hall way...
baileyb2
The little man was holding a small ray-gun thing. Then shot the ray-gun at the goo climbing up to my knee now. The goo evaporated into the air. "What in the world was that?!" The little mad looked up at me with a shocked look on his face. "Who are you? What are you doing here?" I opened my mouth to speak, but the man cut me off. "No, there is no time to waste." He grabbed me by the arm and pulled me though the double doors. Suddenly I was in a class room. I looked like a college biology room. No students. Just the teacher. He looked troubled. "Professor! I found something to do the autopsy on!" I froze then jerked my hand away from him. "No!" I said. "I am not going to let you do that on me." They looked confused. "I am a living thing! And I want to keep living." Out of instinct I bolted out the doors and began running. There was no other door out of this place. I skidded, and then slid though the wall in front of me. When I opened my eyes again I was in the same biology room, but this time it was full of students. "Where have you been?" He paused. "No time for excuses. Go sit down!"...
baileyb3
She didn't bother protesting, she just walked to the nearest open seat and sat down. "Okay class, today well be disecting frogs." Her heart skipped a beat. Her palms were sweaty. "Um, sir?" The Proffesor turned. "I don't feel like killing a innocent amphibian. I mean, what did he ever do to you?" He gave her a puzzled look. "What to you mean? You have killed plenty of things before." Her eyes got wider. "What is up with you Cammie?" A girl asked sitting next to her. "What?! My name is Ashley! Not Cammie." "What are you talking about?" Another boy said. "I am talking about you have the wrong girl! I am Ashley." The girl next to her pulled out a mirror. Ash looked into the mirror and screamed. Her long blonde hair had disapered and had left behind shoulder length light brown hair. Her blue eyes changed to dark green and her thin lips tranced formed into plump pink lips. Also her rounded face was now heart-shaped, but the weirdest part was, she now had a nose and lip ring...
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